High Fantasy

Review: The Glasswright’s Progress

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Title:  The Glasswright’s Progress

Series: Glasswright #2

Author:  Mindy L. Klasky

Genre:  High Fantasy

Warning:  This review will probably contain spoilers of the previous book in the series, The Glasswright’s Apprentice.

Back Cover:

Two years have passed since the Glasswrights’ Guild was shattered.  Now, living in the palace of Morenia’s new king, Rani is determined to rebuild it.  But a betrayal from within snares Rani in a deadly plot to conquer Morenia.  The bloodthirsty King Sin Hazar has an army like none other – utterly dedicated, completely obedient…and entirely comprised of children…

Review:

After reading the awesomeness that was The Glasswright’s Apprentice, I raced to the library and snatched up this book.

But unfortunately, the sequel didn’t live up to its predecessor.

Don’t get me wrong, I liked the book.  But just liked.  Didn’t love, didn’t think it was awesome.  It was a good book, but it didn’t blow me away like The Glasswright’s Apprentice did.

My main problem was with Rani.  She just seemed … passive in this book.  She said she wanted to rebuild the Glasswrights’ Guild, but it’s been two years since book one and she hasn’t done anything.  As far as the book says, she didn’t even think about escaping the army camp – not until Mair discovered King Sin Hazar’s plans.  I’m not sure what her overall goal was in the book.  To get home, maybe?

Another problem was with the storylines.  In the beginning, the book alternates chapters with Rani and a woman named Shea.  And I enjoyed both storylines equally.  But when the two storylines meet, Shea just drops off the map, and Crestman, a secondary character from Shea’s storyline, takes center stage.  I can see why Mindy Klasky added Shea’s storyline, but I wish she’d either made it Crestman’s storyline or given Shea a bigger part in the second half of the book.

One thing I do love about Mindy Klasky’s writing, though, is her brilliance with settings.  I mentioned in my review of The Glasswright’s Apprentice how the amazing setting had a lot to do with why I loved the book so much.  And I think the amazing setting had a lot to do with making this book good.  The setting for the majority of the book was the country of Amanthea, which has its own geography, customs, and intricate caste system.  Especially in the middle, the setting was the best part.

This was a good book.  Not epic but not terrible, better than “meh” but not really great.  Just…well, good.  I’m not sure if I want to read book three, The Glasswright’s Journeyman, or not.

The Glasswright series:

  1. The Glasswright’s Apprentice
  2. The Glasswright’s Progress
  3. The Glasswright’s Journeyman
  4. The Glasswright’s Test
  5. The Glasswright’s Master
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Review: The Glasswright’s Apprentice

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Title:  The Glasswright’s Apprentice

Series: Glasswright #1

Author:  Mindy L. Klasky

Genre:  High Fantasy

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Everything is measured by birth, and moving up in society is almost impossible.  That’s why Rani Trader’s merchant family sacrifices everything to buy her an apprenticeship in the Glasswrights’ Guild.  But being in the wrong place at the wrong time leaves Rani accused of the Royal Prince’s death.  Branded a traitor, Rani doesn’t know where to turn or who to trust – but she is going to clear her name.  Somehow.

Review:

I didn’t have high expectations for this book.  It was one of those I’m-grabbing-this-off-the-shelf-because-it-looks-slightly-better-than-the-other-books-in-the-adult-section kind of decisions.

And so I got my expectations knocked over and trampled on by the awesomeness that is The Glasswright’s Apprentice.  The book starts with a suspiciously angry instructor and a murder.  And it just gets better from there.

Rani was an interesting character.  Normally, she wouldn’t be the kind of character I would really like – I prefer characters a little spicier than her.  But somehow, Mindy Klasky managed to make me like Rani anyway.  I enjoyed following her as she tried to solve the prince’s murder (although her belief that her brother could do no wrong grated on my nerves sometimes).

Normally, this would be the point where I mentioned other characters.  But even though there were a lot of characters in the book, Rani was the only one in all of it.  So, moving on…

The way they did their names was really awesome – you could tell what caste somebody was by counting the syllables in their name.  One syllable was the Touched, the casteless people.  Two syllables were traders and merchants.  Three syllables were guilds-people.  Four syllables were soldiers.  Five syllables were noblemen and royalty.  Rani tended to jump castes during the book (am I the only person who draws the connection between Rani and Jair?  Maybe that’ll play out in future books).

Funny thing – the entire plot would not be something I would normally read.  First, Rani’s trying to find the instructor she suspects killed the prince.  Then she’s trying to keep her identity secret so she doesn’t get executed for the murder, and then she’s trying to find her brother.  But somehow, it managed to hold my interest for the whole 300+ page book.  I think the amazingly well-developed (and highly interesting) setting helped with that.

I did have one thing that bugged me – any time Mair or the other Touched showed up.  Not that I had anything against them, but they had a funny accent to their speech, and Mindy Klasky wrote it like it sounded.  Which meant a lot of apostrophes.  Which meant it was a whole lot slower to read than the rest of the story.

I loved this book.  Now excuse me while I go find book two.

The Glasswright series:

  1. The Glasswright’s Apprentice
  2. The Glasswright’s Progress
  3. The Glasswright’s Journeyman
  4. The Glasswright’s Test
  5. The Glasswright’s Master
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Review: Lightning’s Daughter

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Title:  Lightning’s Daughter

Series: Dark Horse #2

Author:  Mary H. Herbert

Genre:  High Fantasy

Warning:  This review will most likely contain spoilers of the previous book, Dark Horse.

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Gabria’s magic may have saved everyone on the Dark Horse Plains from Lord Medb, but it did very little to change people’s opinions.  Now, the clans face another magical threat – Medb’s right-hand man, Branth, is learning magic.  Despite the clans’ hatred, Gabria must use her magic once again, and hope they don’t kill her for it.

Review:

I got this book for twenty-five cents at a used book sale – and practically the only reason I bought it was because it was the sequel to Dark Horse.

And overall, it was very similar to Dark Horse.  Gabria was the same, just a little older.  Athlone was the same, too, just with a little more responsibility.  And the two plots were just about the same, too.

Last book, the evil magic user was Lord Medb.  This time it’s Branth.  Either way, Gabria must fight a magical duel with the evil magic user to save the world.  The setting changed a bit in this one – a temple, the city of Pra Desh, the plains – but the plot was just about the same.

There was a love triangle thrown in there, but it seemed forced.  I never had any doubts as to which guy Gabria was going to end up with, and half the time, I felt like the romance was just there for the sake of having a romance angle.

This wasn’t unique or outstanding, but it was a quick, interesting read.  It wasn’t amazing, it wasn’t terrible, and it wasn’t as good as Dark Horse.  It was one of those “meh” books that I could take or leave and not care either way.

The Dark Horse series:

  1. Dark Horse
  2. Lightning’s Daughter
  3. Valorian
  4. City of the Sorcerers
  5. Winged Magic
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Review: Dark Horse

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Title:  Dark Horse

Series: Dark Horse #1

Author:  Mary H. Herbert

Genre:  High Fantasy

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After her entire clan is massacred by Lord Medb, Gabria takes on her brother’s identity to become a warrior and exact revenge.  But Lord Medb has resurrected the forbidden art of sorcery.  No mere sword can stand against him.  With the help of an intelligent, magical horse, Gabria is going to make him pay.  If she can keep her gender a secret long enough to learn the skills she needs…

Review:

This was a fifty-cent, bargain sale paperback – one of about ten I found in the fantasy pile.  I didn’t really have high expectations for it, but I figured for fifty cents, what the heck.  And really, I was surprised that I liked it.

Gabria was bold, stubborn, and very, very determined.  But she was also…unremarkable.  Now that I think about it, I can’t name a single characteristic that set her apart from the other characters (besides the fact that she was a girl masquerading as a boy).  She was just an average, standard character.

Athlone was also pretty unremarkable.  He was a fighter, and good at what he did, but he was still pretty standard.  Besides his instinct that something wasn’t quite right about Gabria, I couldn’t name one single unique characteristic.

The book was actually pretty standard, plot-wise.  Main character must learn special skills to defeat evil magician.  There were a few interesting minor details – like the fact that everyone in the book was a nomad, and the magical Hunnuli horses.  But other than that, it was interesting, but not really unique.

Really, the book was unremarkable.  It was interesting, but not outstanding.  I enjoyed it because I’m a fantasy fan, but I didn’t fall head-over-heels in love with it.  I think this could serve as either YA or adult – the main character is seventeen, but it has an adult feel (although no “mature” moments, thankfully).

This is one of those hard books to review.  It’s not terrible, but it’s not wonderful.  It’s not boring, but it’s also not remarkable.  It was just…interesting.  Fantasy fans would like it, but if you’re not a fan of the fantasy genre, this is not a book for you.

The Dark Horse series:

  1. Dark Horse
  2. Lightning’s Daughter
  3. Valorian
  4. City of the Sorcerers
  5. Winged Magic